It’s the late evening train.
Metro North to New Haven.
The Quiet Car.
On my left, sits Stoic. No book. No smartphone. Hands on her lap. Eyes dead ahead.
On my right, sits Dude. Head down, tapping his keys, ear buds pumpin’.
Across, sits Weary. Head back on head rest. Eyes closed. Tinted transition glasses. Lightly salted side burns. Hair, jet black, neatly coifed, perhaps too much so. A Pabst Blue Ribbon Tallboy rests on the floor between his black loafers.
Weary’s eyes pop open and catch me. I avert.
Stoic sits stoic.
Dude is bangin’.
Weary reaches down for the Tallboy, takes a swig, sets it down, leans his head back and swallows deeply.
Then, sighs.
One long day, is greeted with family, dinner, dog and rest. Another long day, his, looks longer, hanging from Faulkner’s meagre and fragile thread, hanging on the edges, solitary before sinking back into darkness.
I stand to grab my coat.
His stare upward to the ceiling remains unbroken.
He catches me again, we connect and break as I exit the train.
I’m walking home.
Family.
Dinner.
Dog.
And Rest.
Notes:
- Photo: Your Eyes Blaze Out
- William Faulkner Quote (modified) from Absalom, Absalom! via classiclit
- Related Posts: Commuting Series

I feel as though I was there David. Love the poem and moving train picture. <3
Diana xo
Thank you Diana. I love the moving train picture too…
Fantastic one
Thank you Rajiv. Appreciate the kind words.
I’d be tempted to get my notebook out to help me remember all those details! I could see those people clearly as you described the ride. Well done.
Smiling. Thank you Anneli. I appreciate the kind words.
You definitely have a good style. You could probably write good Haiku, since you pack so much imagery in few words.
Thank you Anneli. I can barely pronounce Haiku!
Haha. You don’t have to. Just write it.
weary, stoic, dude, the way each gets through another day in the life. not to mention, ‘the observer’ who takes it all in.
Smiling. I should have worked in “The Observer.” Yes. Good one Beth.
And ‘rest’ – yes…all of you – rest
Yes. Especially that.
Fantastic, pal!
Thank you Lori.
Love this DK!
Thanks Val!
A slice of Americana on that train…nice observations. And all of it ends in rest…if we’re lucky.
Yes, thank you Van…Yes.
I see clearly each of your fellow passengers. Wonderful images you created.
Thank you for the kind words Lulu.
Brilliant!
Thanks Jean!
Excellent. I see it, taste it, smell it, feel it. Excellent.
Thank you Catherine.
As soon as I saw “Metro North” I knew this was going to be a good one. I save such posts to read last as I’m going through everything because I know I’m going to be treated to a slice of written dessert. You’re becoming life’s witness, my friend. Thank you.
Awwww, you made my day Carol. Thanks for the kind words. Means a lot to me. Thank you
love this. makes me more aware of what my public persona may be saying about me…..
Oh, so me too LouAnn.
Nicely captured. Been there. Is the photo at the top yours?
Hi. Thank you. No, photo source is noted at bottom of post and it is linked as well.
I love observing people too! I find everyone so interesting. Writing about each one (which you do so very well) reminds us we all have our own unique way of coping in this big wide world. Wonderful writing Dave. Get’s everyone in like a sitcom. “Next episode….”Stoic” woman makes eye contact with “Weary” but “Dude” distracts them with his loud head banging music and “Observer” keen to know what happens…has to get off at the next stop!! Ha
Smiling. Thank you Karen. I like the sitcom reference. Interesting. Shame one can’t follow them on their way to the rest of the day just to see, feel and experience their day.
Beautiful. You’re a “noticer”.
Thank you Lisanne. Appreciate the kind words.
Great post David. Your description of the ride puts me there. Thanks for the share and I enjoyed it 😀
Thank you! Appreciate the kind words…
I take the metro often, but not late at night. I’ve seen the same guys, though, here in Paris. It really is hard to make conversation in the train, really hard.
It is Peter…
I’ve been cycling of late and not kept up online. Silly me. If only I’d read this when it was posted, I could have carried the beauty around in my pocket and reached in to touch it when the day got hard. Silly me.
Thank you Sandy. Appreciate it.
Family.
Dinner.
Dog.
And Rest.
and then blog.
You bring us along with such clarity.
Thank you. You.Made.A.Long.Day.Ending.On.A.High. Appreciate it Bonnie.