This is like telepathy. I just chopped many words from my ms. Many!
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Laughing…me too.
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I was shaking my head to all the above “guilty” as charged ha. This is great. 🙂
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I was nodding my head too Karen!
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Yes!
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Very good advice. I always print my drafts out and walk away for a bit. Inevitably, when I pick them up again I see words I can whack and sentences I can reconfigure. It’s a journey, always…..😊
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Ah yes. And let’s be clear, a journey for a Master craftswoman like you, is significantly shorter than that for the mere mortals.
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less is more and much harder.
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So agree…
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You’ve got the short sentences down. I wish I did. Brevity isn’t my forte.
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Yes. Clarity. Brevity. No Weasels. All the words must carry their weight.
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Yes, that’s it.
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Reblogged this on THE STRATEGIC LEARNER and commented:
Excellent post and well worth sharing again …
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Thanks for sharing John
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Great information David and I enjoyed looking at his blog. Have a wonderful Friday
I exclaim “yes!!!”
see, i’m learning already 😉
YES for me too!
This is like telepathy. I just chopped many words from my ms. Many!
Laughing…me too.
I was shaking my head to all the above “guilty” as charged ha. This is great. 🙂
I was nodding my head too Karen!
Yes!
Very good advice. I always print my drafts out and walk away for a bit. Inevitably, when I pick them up again I see words I can whack and sentences I can reconfigure. It’s a journey, always…..😊
Ah yes. And let’s be clear, a journey for a Master craftswoman like you, is significantly shorter than that for the mere mortals.
less is more and much harder.
So agree…
You’ve got the short sentences down. I wish I did. Brevity isn’t my forte.
Yes. Clarity. Brevity. No Weasels. All the words must carry their weight.
Yes, that’s it.
Reblogged this on THE STRATEGIC LEARNER and commented:
Excellent post and well worth sharing again …
Thanks for sharing John
Great information David and I enjoyed looking at his blog. Have a wonderful Friday
Thanks Tina. Yes, he’s great.
Reblogged this on Ergophilia.
so helpful!
I agree!
Thanks for sharing. This will be quite useful to my students, and me!
Thanks Jim. I thought it was great…